Nov 24, 2005

Domestic Goddess

she finished up the last of her now-cold coffee, folded away the morning paper, and surveyed the scene around her with a critical eye.

"... overflowing laundry basket to the washing machine, breakfast debris to the kitchen sink, dinky cars and trucks back into the toy tub..."

And with a wry twist to her lips admitted that today too was not the day she discovered her telekinetic powers. Or a Mary Poppinsy finger-snap technique.

Dragging the dirty clothes hamper across the room, she paused.

"No, don't eat that play-doh apple ... it's still play-doh. Things don't change into something they're not..."

And along the way she put on her new toy. And the ipod began to shuffle with her.

Her back straightened up. the baggy track pants felt just a tad snugger and lower on the hips; the warm sunlight on her shoulders made her faded vest feel fashionably so.

she shuffled her way through oasis and evanescence. through fleetwood mac and the goo goo dolls. through clearing the table and the living room too. with not quite a spring in her step, but a definite roll to the hips. since no-one was looking anyway.

except for a really a cute looking kid on the carpet playing his new game - putting toys back in the tub.


I don't want the world to see me
coz i don't think that they'd understand
when everythings made to be broken
i just want you to know who i am.

9 comments:

  1. kya baat hai- Ipod and all :) very cool.

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  2. heh. who knows, i may even go jogging... no need for malfunctioning discman! technology rocks.

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  3. you know, when I got the mini thats what I said- treadmill here I come.
    I shall not go into what became of that resolve...

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  4. so true!!

    i actually laughed typing out the comment, i already knew it was all guff.

    once the jeans stop zipping up... we'll switch to longer kurtas!

    PS: this word verification is SERIOUSLY annoying. i have EIGHT twisted letters to decipher and THEN type correctly... gaaah.

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  5. I see you. As does the cute little boy. I know we both think you're swell. I know if more saw you shuffle, you'd have a huge unmanageable fan club!

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  6. treadmill, lets dust you off before the fan club gets here!

    OMG, the house's a mess *rushes around in a frenzy of putting away*

    heehee

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  7. I really like your writing. Somewhere in the distance, a bell peals out and memories come alive. :)

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